Feedback

Hi all

I need some feedback on this video. 

If possible let me know what you think is missing or what should be done differently. None of my friends IRL even plays chess,  they don't watch chess videos and generally are terrible as a feedback source. 

Cheers

https://youtu.be/KoxeI5rf_vU

Hmm. It was pretty well produced but I gave up after five minutes because I wanted to go find out what happened in the game. (Seriously.)

It seems to me that if you are going to take  fifteen minutes, some preview of the most interesting points is required. 

Dude thank you so much. 

I'll have another stab and move through the game quicker. I'll also try to get it down to 10mins which should force more concision from me aswell.

Genuinely thank you